“They put up a rope of fine red silk -”
Delete it.
“On the fine rope -”
Oh no. This is bad.
“But I cannot dance”
This is too easy.
“At least it doesn’t choke me anymore -”
Too dramatic.
All I have to do is jump – jump into the void – and hope this will be
Graceful enough
For them to stare.
Possession by who? Or by what?
I suppose you don’t mean “inspiration”…. ?
Any links with Ion by Plato?
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This was mostly ironical… And yes, a response to Plato!
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